thegirl20: (Ash/Scribbs)
thegirl20 ([personal profile] thegirl20) wrote2006-11-05 12:21 am

Fic: Stuck in a rut (Murder in Suburbia, Ash/Scribbs)

Title: Stuck in a rut
Fandom: Murder in Suburbia
Pairing: Ash/Scribbs
Summary: Ash wants to talk about their relationship.
Word Count: 1107
Rating: R (language)
A/N: LJ seems to be back again. This didn't quite make it in before the midnight deadline. Although, it's still the fourth in the US!

“It’s starting!” Ash called.

“I’m coming, I’m coming.”

Scribbs exited the kitchen carrying a steaming cup in each hand and a packet of biscuits in her teeth. Ash leaned forward and laid out a coaster for each of them on the table. Scribbs put the cups down and opened the biscuits, taking one out and biting into it.

“You’re getting crumbs all over the carpet!”

Scribbs rolled her eyes.

“Budge up.”

Ash sighed and sat up straighter, allowing Scribbs to squeeze in between her and the arm of the couch. She settled back down against Scribbs’ side, opening her mouth and being rewarded when the remainder of Scribbs’ biscuit was thrust into it. She chewed thoughtfully.

“Emma?”

“Hmmm?”

“I’ve been thinking.”

“…”

“Em?”

“What?”

“Did you hear what I said?”

“Yes.”

“Well?”

“I’m trying to ignore you.”

“What?”

“I’m trying to watch this. Can’t it wait?”

Ash stood up and turned the TV off.

“Oi! What are you doing?”

“This is exactly what I’m talking about!”

“What? Missing the results show?”

“No, this. Me and you.”

“What about us?”

Scribbs was on her feet and attempting to use the remote control to turn the TV back on, but Ash moved so that she was blocking the sensor.

“D’you think we’ve turned into an old married couple?”

Scribbs threw the remote onto the couch in frustration, she turned to face Ash with her arms crossed, scowling.

“Well, we’re not old and we’re not married, so I’d have to say ‘no’.”

“But look at us. It’s Saturday night at 9 o’clock, we’re in our pyjamas drinking cocoa and eating digestive biscuits in front of the telly.”

“Well, we were.” Scribbs muttered.

“I just worry that we’re…”

“That we’re what? In a rut? Are you bored with me?”

“No! Not with you. Not at all.”

“And I’m not bored with you either, so that’s all fine. Can we put the telly back on now?”

“I’m trying to have a serious conversation about our relationship here!”

“There’s nothing bloomin’ wrong with our relationship!”

“But…”

“Kate, what did you do on a Saturday night before we got together?”

“I…”

“You sat in, watching telly, alone. Occasionally you went on a bad date. What did I do? I sat in, watching telly, alone. Occasionally I went on a bad date. So, pretty much nothing’s changed, except we’re watching telly together. And we don’t have to go on the bad dates. Which is better, right?”

“Right.”

“And afterwards we’ll go to bed together, which is also better, right?”

“Right.”

“And tomorrow morning, we’ll wake up together, still better, right?”

“Right.”

“Good, now get out of the bloody way!”

Scribbs scrambled to retrieve the remote control, turned the TV back on and collapsed back onto the couch. Ash stood and looked at her for a while,
before coming to join her. She curled up next to Scribbs and took her hand.

“Sorry.”

“Shhh!”

“D’you want me to turn it off again?”

“No. Sorry for shhhing you.”

“That’s OK.”

They sat in comfortable silence. Until Ash spoke again.

“But I was just thinking…”

Scribbs turned the TV off.

“What’re you doing?”

“Obviously I’m not getting to see anything tonight so just get it off your chest.”

Ash sat up and turned to face Scribbs, pulling her knees up to her chin.

“OK, here’s the thing…I’m going to say something and I don’t want to repeat it so you better listen carefully.”

“Kate, you’re really scaring me now.”

Ash took a deep breath.

“OK, you are…a little bit younger than me…”

Scribbs grinned.

“…and sort of…well, cooler than me…”

The grin widened.

“…so I sometimes worry if maybe you’d like to…I don’t know, go out clubbing more or…why are you laughing?”

Scribbs was doubled over and had tears running down her face. She straightened up and attempted to get herself together when she saw the impatient look that was starting to take over Ash’s face.

“Sorry, sorry. It’s just…the last time we went clubbing you complained about your shoes for half of the night and worried that someone was going to spike our drinks for the other half.”

“In that place? I wouldn’t be surprised if the drinks came ready spiked!”

Ash’s lip was curled in distaste. Scribbs put a hand on her knee.

“Kate, I used to go clubbing in the hope that I’d maybe pull someone who’d make me forget about you.”

Ash tilted her head, a pink tinge appearing on her cheeks.

“Really?”

“Yes. And we can see how well that worked out. I’d be content never to see the inside of a club again. I don’t think the addition of clubbing would do anything to improve our relationship. In fact I think it’s pretty damn near perfect the way it is.”

Ash cupped Scribbs’ cheek and brought their lips together.

“Me too,” she whispered, in between kisses.

Scribbs smiled against her lips. She pulled back slightly, rubbing her thumb over Ash’s jawbone.

“Good. Buuuuuut if you wanted to spice things up a little…I do have a couple of ideas we could try.”

Ash quirked an eyebrow.

“Well, I’m always open to suggestion.”

Scribbs flashed a brilliant smile and pushed herself up off the couch. She held a hand out to Ash, who took it and was pulled to her feet.

“What’re we doing?”

“Follow me.”

They headed into the kitchen. Ash hesitated in the doorway.

“Wait…now, you know my thoughts about sex in food preparation areas.”

Scribbs glanced over her shoulder and rolled her eyes as she opened the freezer. She emerged with a tub of Haagen-Dazs.

“Yeah, and I know about your weakness for ‘Cookies & Cream’…I was thinking about spreading it over myself and letting you lick it off. That exciting enough for you?”

Ash looked like she might be struck dumb. Scribbs squeezed past her.

“If you don’t hurry up I might just sit back down in front of the telly and eat this all by myself.”

Ash spun on her heel and hurried after Scribbs.

“I’m coming!”

[identity profile] faithinthepoor.livejournal.com 2006-11-06 11:12 am (UTC)(link)
MIS fic - sigh, squee, sigh.

This is very cute! I love that it basically Ash being neurotic and insecure (in case you were wondering I remain very, very happy that you thought I was an Ash!).

I also love that Scribbs is so annoyed about Ash interrupting TV - a cardinal sin in my book - but that ultimately Scribbs puts down the remote for her (which if I haven't told you before is my definition of love).

Fav lines - Scribbs exited the kitchen carrying a steaming cup in each hand and a packet of biscuits in her teeth. Ash leaned forward and laid out a coaster for each of them on the table. I adore that in two sentences you have summed up there differences in their personalities.

“Well, we’re not old and we’re not married, so I’d have to say ‘no’.” So true and so Scribbs.

“And afterwards we’ll go to bed together, which is also better, right?”

“Right.”

“And tomorrow morning, we’ll wake up together, still better, right?”

“Right.”
I find this so very sweet.

“OK, you are…a little bit younger than me…”

Scribbs grinned.

“…and sort of…well, cooler than me…”

The grin widened.
This is just so cute (and again so Scribbs)

“Sorry, sorry. It’s just…the last time we went clubbing you complained about your shoes for half of the night and worried that someone was going to spike our drinks for the other half.” Good I love Ash!!!!!!!

“Kate, I used to go clubbing in the hope that I’d maybe pull someone who’d make me forget about you.” sigh.

“Wait…now, you know my thoughts about sex in food preparation areas.” BWA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[identity profile] the-girl-20.livejournal.com 2006-11-06 10:17 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you enjoyed this. Now that you've had your exclusive birthday access, I'm going to go ahead and post it to the comm.

I love that it basically Ash being neurotic and insecure - While I believe that once Scribbs gets Ash she will be quite happy and laid back about the whole thing, I think Ash will continue to be neurotic. That's where this came from.

but that ultimately Scribbs puts down the remote for her (which if I haven't told you before is my definition of love - Wow, so this fic is way more romantic than I thought!

I adore that in two sentences you have summed up there differences in their personalities. - Go me!

and again so Scribbs - I like these 'so Scribbs' comments. Because we know I love Scribbs.

I need to write more MiS fic. But first, the Liv fic (I promise!) and the ficathon fics (one of which will be MiS...so that doesn't actually make sense).

[identity profile] faithinthepoor.livejournal.com 2006-11-07 01:58 am (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you enjoyed this. Like that was ever really in doubt.

Now that you've had your exclusive birthday access, I'm going to go ahead and post it to the comm. Cool - I like that it was here for me first.

While I believe that once Scribbs gets Ash she will be quite happy and laid back about the whole thing, I think Ash will continue to be neurotic. Oh absolutely!

Because we know I love Scribbs. It's good that you pointed it out cause I was unaware. I love that you are excited about the next fic - just cause it's a Scribbs' fic.

Go me! Go you indeed.

Wow, so this fic is way more romantic than I thought! It really, really was.

I will look forward to the non-MIS MIS fic then.

[identity profile] the-girl-20.livejournal.com 2006-11-07 09:00 pm (UTC)(link)
It's good that you pointed it out cause I was unaware. - I have been strangely subtle about it, haven't I?

I love that you are excited about the next fic - just cause it's a Scribbs' fic. - Well, that and it's a you fic.

[identity profile] faithinthepoor.livejournal.com 2006-11-09 10:09 am (UTC)(link)
youfic Thanks honey! (you know I was thinking about [livejournal.com profile] thelastgoodname's post about people squeeing about fic that they haven't even read and I automatically thought she was talking about us (for I am a paranoid little creature) and I think I am entitled to be excited when I know you've written something, hell I am excited when I know that you are thinking about writing something. It's you so there will be MAS and all and it's like getting excited about a phone call - you know you like the person so you don't need to be prescient or need assurance that the call will go well in order to be excited.

[identity profile] the-girl-20.livejournal.com 2006-11-09 09:50 pm (UTC)(link)
I haven't read said post (I am absolutely god-awful at reading my 'friends' page - I tend to skip things that aren't communities or you) Anyway, I don't care if she was talking about us.

And while we're analogising...it's like if a film is coming out with your favourite actor/actress in it. You don't know anything about the film, but the fact that Nico-...er, your favourite actor/actress is in it is enough to make you excited about seeing it.

[identity profile] faithinthepoor.livejournal.com 2006-11-11 11:07 pm (UTC)(link)
I tend to skip things that aren't communities or you I definitely skim things that aren't communities or you but that caught me eye for some reason.

er, your favourite actor/actress is in it is enough to make you excited about seeing it. - I saw RV for Kristin - nuff said.