Waaaaaaaaaa!MAKINGLOUDNOISESOMG. I am so late with reading this, but have to comment that this is probably the most adorable (post-coital?) fic I've ever read. Realistic, dialogue was timed and perfect and on the same level as the girls themselves, I'm sitting here in wonderment as to whether you planted a camera in Marcia's bedroom to watch this scene unfold for real before your eyes.
Indeed, I shall sit and think about this, and also relive the naked pouncing.
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Date: 2006-04-05 02:58 am (UTC)Indeed, I shall sit and think about this, and also relive the naked pouncing.