Sorry that it took so long to say so. But you know what? PARTS OF IT ARE VERY VISUAL. For me, at least.
And I think those are my favorites! The flashes of Kathryn's memories -- and I like how you do that, because while it's obvious you're navigating what little is actually known about all that shit, it feels so confident and RIGHT -- the way Ruby won't meet Regina's gaze, and the plates. For some reason, I really love the plates. Because, of COURSE.
You know, for now you might not often write, but when you do you get it really right. (Badum bum.)
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Date: 2012-09-08 06:17 pm (UTC)Sorry that it took so long to say so. But you know what? PARTS OF IT ARE VERY VISUAL. For me, at least.
And I think those are my favorites! The flashes of Kathryn's memories -- and I like how you do that, because while it's obvious you're navigating what little is actually known about all that shit, it feels so confident and RIGHT -- the way Ruby won't meet Regina's gaze, and the plates. For some reason, I really love the plates. Because, of COURSE.
You know, for now you might not often write, but when you do you get it really right. (Badum bum.)