First thing's first. Sad face over the fic in its entirety because omg, bb. This was... I want to say it made me uncomfortable, but it didn't, it was just really, very harsh and bitter and just... POOR EMMA!! This did not make me like Terri at all.
I've told you the strange parts that I like.
On to the second thing. Happy face because it's you and wrote this and you wrote it well and I love what you write. So I'm happy that you wrote this and continued it on from the first two.
Okay character assassinations.
Emma. You puppy dog. Seriously? She does this to you and you chase her to the door and beg her to stay? Does not compute. I just... The only thing that redeemed you was that you slammed the door in Terri's face and told her to leave you alone until she learns to cope with what she is feeling.
Terri. I'm torn between telling you to go fuck yourself or man up. I'l leave it at that.
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Date: 2010-05-02 12:07 pm (UTC)I've told you the strange parts that I like.
On to the second thing. Happy face because it's you and wrote this and you wrote it well and I love what you write. So I'm happy that you wrote this and continued it on from the first two.
Okay character assassinations.
Emma. You puppy dog. Seriously? She does this to you and you chase her to the door and beg her to stay? Does not compute. I just... The only thing that redeemed you was that you slammed the door in Terri's face and told her to leave you alone until she learns to cope with what she is feeling.
Terri. I'm torn between telling you to go fuck yourself or man up. I'l leave it at that.