ext_232806 ([identity profile] faithinthepoor.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] thegirl20 2006-05-07 11:19 pm (UTC)

I am totally torn about where I should be replying to this - I have replied to all of your other SVU fics here but you replied to my Alex fic at [livejournal.com profile] alex_liv_lovers so it's hard to be keeping my ducks in a row.

So let's start with the formalities - Love it of course! - and get down to discussing the bits that I really loved...

“Is it a hotel?”

“No.”

“Then it’s camping.”
- I heart Alex, I love that she has the Troop Beverly Hills version of roughing it! I consider it camping if I don't have cable, a DVD player and internet access.

I should point out that my current boss (well one of the three - all of whom are able to recognise that I am obsessional and freaken' adorable) reports that on his last vacation, getting a car with GPS saved his marriage - so I think Elliot may well me right about vacations.
Also am still loving Elliot in general you never told me you were vacationing in a Disney movie and Hey! I’m a detective, I’m inquisitive by nature. both made me laugh.

Good. My couch feels way too big when you’re not here.” Like Alex, I thought this was adorable and we all know that I am an expert on the freaken' adorable

The offending limb came alive all at once with painful pin-pricks as blood flooded back into thirsty capillaries. My fav line - total prose love!!!

Is that country music?” Now that, missy, I am not so sure about (I will just have to make sure that my version of Alex loves all the things that I do)

I adored the declarations of fucking love!!!!!!!!!!

The bit that I loved the most is ‘Grammy Liv, how did you know that Grammy Lex was the one you were gonna spend the rest of your life with?’ ‘Well, as-yet-unnamed-grandchild, I think it was probably when she told me that she fucking loved me in the backseat of my car after she’d run through the woods naked…good times, good times’ - For so many reasons but especially the as-yet-unnamed-grandchild bit and the fact that Alex had no problems with the thought that they would be together and have grandchildren - good time, good times indeed!!!!

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