Love how Book explains the situation they're in - This was the first time I'd written Book. He's not as difficult as I thought he might be. Mainly because he's quite straightforward in his manner and states things quite plainly.

the Mal/Inara fight - I wonder what they were fighting about ;) Must've been bad if she would rather marry Jayne than him.

Simon's lame proposal - You just know Simon would mess it up.

Glad you liked this. I enjoyed writing it. I may write the ceremony at some point. I am slowly becoming addicted to crack!fic.