ext_232806 ([identity profile] faithinthepoor.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] thegirl20 2011-10-09 04:58 am (UTC)

So you know I took a while to read this because I was frightened by the description (especially the possibility of things not being in order) right?

I like this and I will read the others just as soon as my super slow internet allows.

For now let's talk about the bits I liked.....

hazel eyes that were perfectly made-up in that way that Jane could never seem to achieve without making herself look like a drag-queen Oh Jane I feel ya!!!

even though she’d just watched three of her hard earned bucks literally going down the drain. Maura may need to work on realising just how different their worlds are.

Jane found herself smiling and shaking her head. In the middle of a dark, wet October night in Boston, this woman had found the time to dress herself like a runway model, apply make-up and make a thermos of coffee. And she’d still been at the scene before Jane.
Unlike Jane I would have seen this as a flaw ;)

“You won’t know until you run some...Maura, there’s a knife in his chest. There’s blood everywhere. I’m gonna take a stab in the dark and say it was...hey, what do you know, a stab in the dark.”That's my Jane

“I will agree that a knife has been inserted into his chest with considerable force. I am unable to determine at this stage whether or not that is what caused his death.” And that's my Maura.

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